Sure man, I'll listen to your song too.
MetalBladeGamer pretty much hit the nail on the head for what I'd say. I like the instruments and the basic melody, it just could use some more variety.
One example I'm thinking is that it might have been cool to switch up the drum beat that "flows" more, to give it more of a rolling groove. As it is right now, you kind of switch between the "four on the floor" kicks and the more syncopated drum patterns. I think both of those make good accents or build-ups, but when they make up the whole drum track, the song kind of has a stilted/rigid feel to it. I'm not really an authority on electronic music though, so that might be the norm for the genre. I personally think it would've benefited from being a little groovier.
Again, the melody ideas are cool, though. Especially the little bit at the very beginning. I think that would've been great to hear again later as a counterpoint instrument.
Those are just a few points of criticism I have. Otherwise, I think it's a fine song and the three oscillators weave in and out of each other really well.
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Very funky har har. Good stuff. Sometimes when the bass is distorted (I think) it sounds a little too aggressive for the rest of the song, but overall good stuff
Cool song. Bits and pieces remind me of Descent. Mainly the modulations or whatever. Goooood stuff
oh i not know Descent
I liked the first 20 seconds a lot. After that, the "lead" part didn't really seem to mesh as well with the rest of the song.
yeah, I just made this really quick, took like 15 minutes ors, so Ill fix that.
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Doesn't really sound like trance, which is a plus. It's not something I'd necessarily listen to for the sake of listening, but it's good in being a creepy.. thing.
i use trance genre cuz they dont have the choice of my style im electronica dj so...
electronica it blend of trance and techno jazz an more at low tempo :P
anyway thanx for voting
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